Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Looping In-Class Freewrite


I thought that in my community I was very safe and that I had no violence. This analysis made me think of the topic more because I moved from where I us to live and that turned out to be a very violent place. Since I was so young I never had to experience things on hand but my older brothers and sister experienced this violent act because of the friends they had. Neither my brother nor my sisters were violent but they had friends that were in gangs and got into fight some even got killed. I believe that people should be more aware of this bigger problem because it can affect our next generation of people that can be bigger then they can imagine. If the next generation is faced with violent act they are most likely going to end up behind bars, it amazes me that I was not aware of this particular problem because I thought it didn’t really happen where I am from but with the analysis that Rodriquez has made it makes me more aware of all the consequences that violence has and all the problem it has cause with our current society. Many people can argue that this isn’t a problem but it is because they are the next generation and the youth is what is going to be setting up the society. People need to be more aware of this and take a stand to make a change.
I believe that people should be more aware of this bigger problem because it can affect our next generation of people. Since many of the youth are getting in to gangs and are becoming a problem with law enforcements, they are being put aside when they can be doing something with their lives since they are so young they have many more things to live for and they are being shut down and are not being able to become anything in life. Which can stop them from being something for the community or the society as a whole. The youth is not being looked at propyl and they are going nowhere with their lives they need to be guided to make better choice for their futures since they are the future for the incoming society. People need to face the problem to fix it and everyone should be involved to solve the problem so save the next generation.
 Many people can argue that this isn’t a problem but it is because they are the next generation and the youth is what is going to be setting up the society. People need to be more aware of this and take a stand to make a change. When people become so blind-sided about this problem they forget who are the people that this problem is affecting the most. The future is getting affected because society is corruptly putting aside the bigger picture and that is that violence can happen anywhere. If adults and law enforcement were to take a stand and help the youth and guide them through the right path youth wouldn’t turn to gangs or violence. Once people stat to care about what is going on they can do something about it and be their for the youth because they are all so young and need help from adults to make better choice, this doesn’t mean that parents or law enforcement should be all over the youth just help them when needed and be their to support them when necessary.  Adults are so caught up with their own problems that they neglect the youth and that just makes them feel so lonely that they turn to whatever they feel will bring them the love that they find at home or with the people they look up too.

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