WEAKEST: I feel like my introduction is my weakest paragraph because i didn't identify who Lessing is and i didn't identify what her proposal was so that my reader can understand what i am agreeing with or disagreeing with.
Lessing argues that people tend to think as a group with out being aware of it. This is a bigger problem then you think because people lack of awareness. We have access to many information about humanity and society but people don’t use it so they have no knowledge about certain problem that’s are going on. People tend to want to be part of a group so they see no fear on group-minds. Constantly being part of a group and thinking as one can cause many consequences such as losing control of your individualism, not being true to yourself, and falling into peer pressure and doing things that you don’t believe in. I believe that people should be more aware of situations that can affect their lives. People should try to be more individualize then going along with the flow, its an easy way out to let others decide for you but in the long run many of the decisions can affect people in negative ways.
Strongest: I believe that is is one of my strongest paragraphs because I feel like my reason is true for many people and they can relate with me. I feel like my evidence was very precise and straight forward for others to understand what my point was.
People tend not to care when they believe an issue cant and doesn’t affect them so they go along with what a group believes because it makes it much easier for them. Personally I use to think the same way, I didn’t care about any topic all I care about was myself I was being very selfish and thought that my opinion didn’t mater much people I’m only one person. As I grew older I started to disagree with a lot of thing that were going on around me because they didn’t seem fair for my love ones and other that I care about. I started to speak out and tell others what I believed I got in plenty of arguments to say what I believed in and to have others hear what I had to say. Then I started to realize that not everybody wanted things to go a certain way they just fear that if they specked out they would get in trouble or something bad would happen to them. People believe that they don’t care about certain things but I know that if they knew what things were doing they wouldn’t like what was going on. But people are lazy and rather have others think for them because they feel like regardless of what they believe they don’t have the power to change things.
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