1. What was most helpful from the peer revision secession was all the helpful comment I was receiving on how I could improve my essay. My peers suggested I should explain more in deep my reason and be more direct with my audience because i was just putting up my reasons and I wasn't explaining why I had those reasons.
2. I feel like everything was very helpful because I got to hear from other what I could improve before my final draft.
3. After all the feed back I am planing on changing my introduction and adding one more reason. I will also have to be specific with what i am trying to say with my evidence. I will also have to add evidence from Lessings speech
4. I will reread the speech of Lessings and add or change what others suggested I should change. I will also look over the homework to make sure that I am accomplishing what i want my essay to look when the final draft is due.
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