Reflecting on Essay #2 Feedback

1. What supersede me the most was the over all grade I revived. Personal I believe I did well, My organization may have been all over the place and very genetic but I don't like sugar coating all my thoughts and saying more information then I should. I feel like if I do I will be limited on what I would like to say.  

2. The comments were all very useful; I know where I need improvement on. Which are my structure and organization. In order to do so I need to take more time revising and I need to clarify my argument. 

3. Although all the comments are understandable I don't really understand why I need to focus more on specific language, I feel like what I say is easy understandable and self-explainable. 

4. Based on the comments on my next essay I should take more time structuring my essay with my thought. By accomplishing this points will be clear and better understood.

5. The time we were given to do this essay I believe that I waited to long to start working on the final. If I would have put more time in this easy I would have been able to attend office hours.

6. To ensure I did well in my next essay I will go to office hours when I feel like I need help I would but more effort in the structure of my essay and make my points clear to that I can have a better understandable essay.

Generating Ideas about the Value of Social Media in a Democracy

7.Why is social media an effective tool for spreading awareness? 

People tem. to write their daily life schedule. People but up things that they think are important want others to be more aware of the situation. Many people spend most of their time online so they are constantly looking at things that are being posted, Since people are mostly online other find it easier to get a hold of them.

1.How is social media changing?

Social media is changing because many people are just waiting for others to inform them with news instead of them seeking news on their own. People are letting others tell the news on their own perspective and the people are not getting all the correct information. Many people lack the confidence to search things on their own and rely on others to get information from.